This week’s photo prompt is provided by Tim Livingston with the blog, The ForesterArtist. Thank you Tim for our photo prompt this week!
Both David and Rachel were both professionals working for a multinational company who hardly found time for themselves. They planned a gateway from all the maddening ruckus of city life to spend a relaxing weekend in a secluded bungalow in the pristine forests.
When they reached the bungalow it was already evening. It was an archetypal house dating back to the eighteenth century with huge rooms full of antique furniture.
A quiet and eerie night; the only sound that could be heard were of the chirping of the crickets and occasional howls of the foxes. Around 2:30 a.m. Rachel awoke screaming and trembling from a nightmare she had.
“There was a man who has had an awful accident in the forests and is wailing for help,” cried an anguished Rachel.
In the morning David followed Rachel’s description which led astonishingly to a shattered car in the midst of the forest through which trees and plants had grown. God knows how long this has been here thought both of them.
Great chiller of a story – has Rachel a special power to see these things happening? Well done.
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Thank you so much Iain for reading my story and commenting on it. Glad you liked it.
Yeah Rachel saw everything in her dream or rather nightmare. I leave the rest to the readers imagination.
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An emergency call answered decades too late.
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Thank you for stopping by and reading my story.
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Darun…puro bangali pattern of story telling…like this…
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Thank you. Jakhan Bangali takhon its best to keep to the roots.
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Yup…Amio tai kori…korchi…Captiveta Saradindu r Satyajit Ray pattern mix…Once Saratchandra r Bankimchandra…flash gulo jokhn jeta suit korche…ajk jgulo post korechi sob Rayk follow kore mix HG Wells & Jhumpa Lahiri…
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Good . Kintu ami amar moto korey likhi….akhono kowkey follow kori ni . Khub karap kintu bangla boi schooler porey khub ekta porini..Bhabitsatey ki korbo jani na.
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Ami to anya byapare chintito…English tense nie puro tense…edk Bangla spelling nie…😐
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:). Tumi kichu Banglai publish korona kano ekhaney. Amar money hoy khub bhalo hobey..
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Korbo…khub icha…kintu bhalo software ki ache janina…jano ki tumi?
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Na ami jani na . You can ask some tech guy.
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Hmm…thank you…Ep 1 kmn laglo janio r M seriesr rip off ta…
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Okay
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By the way Captive Ep 1 kmn laglo janio
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This was chilling!! By the way, love the name of your site!!
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Thank you so much!
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She dreamed of the accident that left that car in the forest! I wonder if they found a skeleton inside? Wonderful story!
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Thank you so much ! I have left that to the imagination of the readers.
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LOL! Oh, haha! My story does the same thing. LOL!
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LOL!
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Now I am wondering was she in this car as a young child, great story.
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Great thought! It’s possible. Thank you stopping by and reading my story.
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Haunting! the spirit was still there .
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Thank you Anne!
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That dream was floating around trying to find a home for years I guess. I enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you so much.
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Wow!! Hats off to your imagination!!
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Thanks a lot Kitty!
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Sushmitaji, how do I participate on this challenge?
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https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com/2017/03/13/fffaw-challenge-week-of-march-14-2017/
Hi Kitty,
Publish your post and then go to the link given above . Then click on the blue frog button and copy and paste the link of your post and also give your email address in the menu boxes given there. You’ll find instructions in the blog whose link I have given above.
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Thanks a lot! Will do
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Excellent! You’ve left a lot to the imagination of the reader, and I like that!
Click to read my story
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Thank you so much Keith !
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Hi Kieth,
I tried to give my comments in your blog but didn’t succeed in doing so. Its saying my Open ID credentials couldn’t be verified.
Any you have great writing style. It’s humorous and I enjoyed reading it thoroughly. Well done Keith.
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So many possibilities BTW I love your blog design
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Thank you so much!
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